Technical Writing

Task 2 - Beauty Ciganjur

Ciganjur is such a beautiful small town for me. Located in the South Jakarta near Pasar Minggu, ciganjur still have cool and clean environment rather than other place in Jakarta. The culture shows that people in ciganjur are very friendly and religious. [give examples] And [it is not good to be used at the beginning of a sentence] the most important thing is that ciganjur save many unforgetable memory within me. [ what are the memories]

The environment here still cool and natural. There are still many wild plants and animals. Banana tree, Durian tree, and Guava tree dominants in ciganjur plantation. They sprouts annually, and used for people economic rather than for eating. Beside plants, sometimes we can found wild animals around ciganjur. Civet or known in Indonesia as musang is a popular wild animal that can be often seen in ciganjur. People sometimes hunt them down because they eat people's hen.

There are few lakes in Ciganjur, but only one big lake i remember, Situ lake. Situ lake have very interesting view and very suit for a place for tour. There are fish breeding in situ lake, duck boat, many food seller, and a few of public facilities. Because of that, Situ lake often crowded with visitor, especially in holidays. I often visit this lake with my family to use my vacation time and i save many unforgettable memory in this lake [what do you really mean?].

However, ciganjur beauty always take me to nostalgia about my past times. That's why i always feel that the best place to visit is my hometown. Do you?

Where is your credibility as a writer? You made so many mistakes.

posted by Tri Aji Nugroho @ 8:34 PM