Technical Writing

Integrated Home Security System:Make Your Home As Secure As A Bank, Not A Jail

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Nowadays, by the advancement of architectural study, houses can be built in various design. However, the basic purpose of a house remains the same, it is to provide some shelter for its occupant. Along the ages, that need of protection has evolved into a more complex requirement of security.
People no longer care for protection from natural evidences such as rains, stroms, and wild animals only, but also demand some measure of protection of theft and other human-related incidents. Some people cover this need by hiring some guards to watch for their house. Despite its effectiveness, this kind of solution is basically inefficient. [ these sentences are not necessary, ' I know you know so what?'. It is better for you to write the latest trend of housing security demands in the modern world, big cities, etc, so that you can link the idea of modern and sophisticated system smoothly. Even you can predict what will be needed in a modern life etc. You need to write down 'what is or are the need(s) for home security']. To answer this need of efficient solution, a techonogical-based integrated home security system is therefore proposed.
Integrated home security system is a complex system that able to manage entire electricity system (lamps, airconditioner, gateway, generator, etc), monitor entire house without pursued by time and distance, and control all parts of the system manually and remotely from a long distance. Of course to build this complex system needs newest technologies that make communication between owner and system come true.

Some points that will be discused:
General functions of a house [no need, just in one or two sentences]
How secure does your home? [no need, just in one or two sentences]
Introductory to integrated home security system
Required equipments
Technology used by the system
Implementation cost estimation

posted by Wijoyo Simanjuntak @ 3:26 PM